Okay, wow.
I got so many great entries for this challenge! It was extremely hard to pick the winner... but, I have!!
The winner of the Chatty Kathy Writing Challenge is.... *Drum Roll*....
I loved his story about cocoa on the air! I think I about die of cuteness overload everytime I read "The Adventures of Cocoa the Goat."
Here is the entry:
~Written by Eli~
"Cocoa, Pumpkin and Emily quickly sat down in their seats. The On Air
sign above the door turned red. Cocoa picked up her microphone and said,
“Hello, everyone out there in goatie land! Thank you for tuning in to
Cocoa’s radio station!”
Cocoa winked at Pumpkin. “Today I have a special surprise for you! I have invited a guest speaker to talk to you about the importance of keeping your hooves clean and trim.” Pumpkin cleared her throat then spoke into the microphone. “My name is Pumpkin, and yes, today I will tell you just how important it is to keep your hooves clean…” Pumpkin cleared her throat again and said, “It’s very important!” Cocoa grabbed the mic and said, “Thank you for that very wise advice. And now to our news!”
Cocoa looked at her sister Emily and whispered, “You’re on.” Emily searched for her papers then said, “And now for your daily news…today two goats got hit on Route 30. Police say there wasn’t much left to identify who they were!” Pumpkin, Cocoa and Emily looked at each other and made sour faces. Emily continued. “Some local goats egged a butcher shop last night. The butcher is suing for damages. And that’s all the news for now.”
Emily put down the mic and said, “Cocoa, play a song!” Cocoa grabbed a record and said, “And now for some music…” She turned the record on, then all three goats quietly slipped out for lunch break."
Cocoa winked at Pumpkin. “Today I have a special surprise for you! I have invited a guest speaker to talk to you about the importance of keeping your hooves clean and trim.” Pumpkin cleared her throat then spoke into the microphone. “My name is Pumpkin, and yes, today I will tell you just how important it is to keep your hooves clean…” Pumpkin cleared her throat again and said, “It’s very important!” Cocoa grabbed the mic and said, “Thank you for that very wise advice. And now to our news!”
Cocoa looked at her sister Emily and whispered, “You’re on.” Emily searched for her papers then said, “And now for your daily news…today two goats got hit on Route 30. Police say there wasn’t much left to identify who they were!” Pumpkin, Cocoa and Emily looked at each other and made sour faces. Emily continued. “Some local goats egged a butcher shop last night. The butcher is suing for damages. And that’s all the news for now.”
Emily put down the mic and said, “Cocoa, play a song!” Cocoa grabbed a record and said, “And now for some music…” She turned the record on, then all three goats quietly slipped out for lunch break."
Congrats, Eli!
Later,
Kathryn (aka Chatty Kathy)
Kathryn (aka Chatty Kathy)
14 chatty people:
GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!! It was SOOOO funny!!!
I know, wasn't it great?
Haha, that's okay!! And I totally understand :)
I wanted to enter, but I was so busy. Sorry. :(
~Godsgirlz1
http://godsgirlz1.wordpress.com
yay!
Congrats, Eli! :D
~Hannah
Congrats
Host the next challenge soon! LOL
I want to enter this time! :D
YAY, I won!!! LOL! You really about die of cuteness overload when you read Cocoa's story? WOW! I didn't know I made Cocoa so sweet. I hope she doesn't get a big head!
~Eli
P.S. Thank you everyone for your congratulations!
That's okay! Maybe next time!!
Yes, congrats!
Haha, yes I do!! They are so creative, and Cocoa has such a wonderful personality :) She's famous! I think we all would love to meet her one day, agreed? :D
Good job!
Thanks!
~Eli
Oh, Kathy! I am SO sorry. I completely ran out of time. I had school and other stuff on. I hope I can enter the next one.
Love, Annie-Jo
PS. @Eli - really cute!
Oh, I understand! I am always busy!! :)
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